在前几期的推文中,我们针对大作文的不同话题的破题思路做了分析,从这一期开始,我们将对大作文的不同题型进行讲解,帮助大家理清文章结构及破题的注意事项,写出高分文章。很多同学比较困惑双边讨论类题目,不知道到底文章应该怎么做出讨论,本期我们就针对这一高频题型来给大家做出正确写法的梳理~
理解题目
双边讨论题型长这样⬇️
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
定义:简单概括,就是一些人说了某一个观点,另一些提出了质疑,给出了另一个观点。两者争锋相对
要求:很多同学在写此类题型的时候很容易忽略题干的要求,一个是discuss both views,讨论双方的观点,另一个是give your own opinion,给出自己的观点。因此,我们的文章中必须对这两个要求做出回应。有些同学只针对一方观点给出论证,有些同学没有给出自己的观点,这些错误的写法会直接在我们的评分项中的task response部分做出相应的扣分,没有对题目有全面的理解。
文章结构&思路示范
对于双边讨论题目的文章结构有如下两种:
1. 两个观点任选其一作为自己的立场
因为此类题型的最大特征就是
两个观点是相互驳斥的,因此提出第三种和它俩不一样的观点的难度是比较大的,可能需要我们在考场上浪费较多的时间。那么把两者中的一个观点纳为己用是最好的选择,可以帮助我们更快的进入到主体段的展开论证中。具体结构如下:
开头:给出立场(选择两个观点的其一)
主体段一:第一波人的观点的合理性
主体段二:第二波人的观点的合理性
结尾:重申立场即可
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因为我们的立场不需要单独给出,包含在里面,因此写一个四段式的文章即可。我们拿一道题目具体来看下~
Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
选择其中之一波人的观点作为文章主旨,然后简列提纲如下:
开头:我认为应该投资教师
Though technology is important today,
teachers are still considerably more valuable and deserving of prioritization.
主体段一:支持投资电脑的合理性
Proponents argue increased funding for computer technology reflects shifts in modern society.
主体段二:支持投资老师的合理性(包含我方立场)
However, teachers can potentially be a crucial influence on their pupils.
结尾段:重申立场,老师更值得投资
In conclusion, those who argue in favor of computers are short-sighted as teachers have greater overall impact.
2. 提出一个新的观点作为立场
如果题目中给出的两个观点都不太好论证,导致整篇文章字数较少,我们也可以另辟蹊径,想一个容易论证的新观点切入。具体结构如下:
开头:给出自己新的立场
主体段一:第一波人的观点的合理性
主体段二:第二波人的观点的合理性
结尾:自己新的立场并进行论证
来看一道例题⬇️
Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
开头段:给出自己的想法-其他激励和奖励措施与题目中的举措并行会带来更有效的结果
I personally believe that various other motivations and rewards, in combination with this initiative, will bring effective results.
主体段一:支持雇主提供运动补贴的合理性
The proponent of gyms or sports club subsidies offered by employers believes that physical and mental wellness is a prerequisite for optimal work performance.
主体段二:这一做法不会有好处的合理性
The opponent of gyms or sports facility funding says that companies should focus on incentives that really matter to employees instead, namely job prospects, pay increments, job satisfaction, training opportunities, reasonable workloads and holidays.
结尾段:自己的观点-应结合其它形式奖励,比如金钱奖励
In conclusion, I believe that gyms or sports clubs membership offered by the office is one of many effective motivations for some employees to work efficiently at work. But for many others, monetary or other tangible or intangible rewards are more useful. It is expected that employers will provide a range of extrinsic and intrinsic motivators that will promote productivity at work.
本文作者
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以上为双边讨论题型的两种文章展开结构,为了帮助大家熟悉结构写法和学习到更多爽吧讨论题目的常用观点句表达,我们还准备了此题型下的高频题目范文及思路解析。想获得资料的同学可以向马甲发送暗号
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