托福口语中的Task 1 基本上是最让同学们头疼的事情了,一般在说独立口语的45秒钟都会真切地感受到如坐针毡如芒刺背如鲠在喉的奇妙体验。在努力地车轱辘话来回说了45秒钟以后,终于在计时结束的时候如释重负,结果看到分数的时候悲痛不已。其实独立口语没有我们想象得那么难。
对于不同类型的独立口语题目,我们是有不同的破题方法的。
托福独立口语情景题题目
今天我们介绍的是一种叫做情景题的题目,用俗话来说就是特别特别长的题目。有多长呢?我们来看下面这一道题:
Imagine that you have been offered two new jobs in the same field. One of the jobs requires you to work regular hours at the company’s office. For the other job, you would work from home and have more flexible hours. Which of the jobs would you prefer? Explain why, using details and examples.
这种特别长的题目共同的特性就是非常的具体,以至于我们不知道如何展开。一般情况下,如果题目没有这么长的话我们还可以说I prefer to work at the company’s office, because I’d like to work regular hours, 或者I prefer to work from home, because I’d like to have more flexible hours。但是这个题目把什么都说了,情景设定还特别具体,导致我们不知道如何再把它具体化了。这可怎么办呢?
托福独立口语答题攻略
首先我们可以brainstorm一下,比如说我们选择了第一个立场,那么在办公室有固定上班时间地工作有哪些好处呢?首先,每天可以看到同事们可以让我们建立人脉关系(relationship building)。其次,每天有固定工时会让我们的工作更加有条理(structured),从而变得更加高效(efficient)。同样,在办公室办公会让我们的工作目标更加清晰(clear expectations), 因为主管和同事们可以给我们提供及时的反馈(immediate feedback)。最后,因为在办公室上班的话工作地点分明,一般离开办公室就彻底下班了,所以对我们的心理健康(mental health)也有帮助,可以让我们的生活和工作更加平衡(improved work-life balance)。
通常情况下,想到这些理由并不难,但是我们并不太知道如何去论证这些特别具体特别生活化的理由。这种情况下,我们就要用到这篇文章最重要的知识点,也就是举例的方法了。
逻辑论证我们想不出来,编故事还不会吗?只要这个故事有比较具体的时间地点人物,起因经过结果,而且在最后有一个总结似的话语来点题,就可以帮助我们拿到高分。比如说我选择论证在办公室办公会让我们的工作更加有条理从而提高工作效率可以这样举例:
Once, I had to work on a project that had a tight deadline. When I was given the task, my manager explained that I needed to come to office during fixed hours and complete the project within the stipulated time frame. It seemed like a difficult task as I had multiple other commitments as well to focus on.
这一部分交代了事情的起因,也就是说我有一个ddl特别紧的工作,然后我的主管让我来坐班在固定时间做这份工作。我当时觉得这个事情非常困难。这里起到了很好的铺垫作用。
But as I started working during these fixed hours, I learnt how beneficial it actually was.
这里通过
转折说我发现了固定时间上班的好处。
Firstly, I was able to stick to a fixed routine which meant that I could structure my day better. Secondly, with the help of colleagues, I was able to finish certain tasks more efficiently as we worked together. Additionally, since I was at the office there were fewer distractions which allowed me to concentrate more on my tasks.
这里通过
例子引出了固定时间上班的三个好处:
第一是我可以跟随一个固定的步骤(routine),也就是说每一天都更有规划,而且我也可以计划好先做哪个项目,保证我可以专注于更加优先级别的项目;
第二是有了同事们的帮助,我可以通过合作的方式更加高效地工作;
第三是在办公室的时候没有那么多的干扰,我可以更好地专注于我的工作。
如果要说另一个立场的话,我们也可以用同样的讲故事的方法。当然了,编故事也不一定要编和自己有关的故事,我们也可以编“我有一个朋友系列”嘛,反正都无法查证。在头脑风暴的时候,我们可以想出来在家有着灵活的工作时间表可以让我:
1. 时间很灵活(flexible hours),可以随时为了个人和家庭的安排(personal and family commitments) 而调整工作时间;
2. 省钱(save money),因为可以省下通勤的费用;
3.发展在办公室的框架以外的工作技能(work skills);
4. 有机会让自己的工作地点(workspace)发挥创造力(get creative)。
假设我们想说第三个原因,也就是说在家有着灵活的时间工作可以让我们发展其他的工作技能的话可以说这样的一个例子:
To illustrate, let me take the example of my friend Lily. Lily is a young entrepreneur and found a great way to make money from home. She set up her own company selling handmade jewelry online. She chose to work from home and worked on her own schedule
这就是著名的“我有一个朋友系列”了。我的一个叫Lily的朋友是一个年轻的创业者,她发现了很好的在家挣钱的方式。她建立了售卖手工珠宝的一个网店,然后就从此之后都在家工作了。这里是一个故事的背景,也就是起因。
The flexibility that Lily experienced was great for her work skills. Having the opportunity to make her own decisions and to manage her own time allowed her to think outside the box and to become more creative in her problem solving. She also taught herself how to build a website, how to manage her own budget, and how to advertise her jewelry effectively.
这里说了Lily通过在家工作而发展了很多技能。其实在这个例子当中,我们也用到了细节展开的方法。比如说如何建网站,如何安排预算,如何打广告这些。多说一些这些具体的skills会让例子丰实而且生动很多。
As she honed her skills, her online business flourished. The experience reinforced her confidence and developed both her technical and interpersonal skills, all while working from her own home.
最后这一段就是这个例子的结尾啦。既然是夸在家工作的好处就要给Lili这个无中生有的朋友一个很好的ending,也就是说她不仅技能更多了,生意也更好了。这个在家工作的经历不禁让她的技术和与人交往的能力都有了长进,还让这个成功人士更加自信了。
总之,遇到这种特别长的题目的时候我们可以做的就是用魔法打败魔法。既然已经问得如此具体甚至是细枝末节了,我们就举一个更加具体的例子来证明我们的观点。只要这个例子
有详细的时间地点人物,而且起承转合都很清晰并且和我们所说的观点很符合,我们都是可以拿高分的!
下面我们可以试着练习一下几个情景题题目,实战演练一下!
托福独立口语实战演练
?1. Imagine that you need to find housing next semester and have found two possible apartments. The first apartment is within walking distance to campus, but the rent is a little expensive. The second apartment is farther away from campus, but the rent is more affordable. Which apartment do you think is better? Explain why.
?2. Imagine that you must decide between two homes to live in. One place is very large and is brand new, but it is very far from your place of work or university. The second place is very small and is very old, but you would be able to get to work or university in less than five minutes. Which place would you prefer to live in? Explain why
?3. Imagine you are looking for a new place to live near your university. You have two choices The first place is in a house, which you would share with several other students. The second place is a small apartment, which you would not have to share with others Which would you choose? Explain why.
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